Annyeonghaseyo (hello), Luke. I’m Emerald, a former student in your class, Room 3. and is new to blogging like you.
I really like the decoration added to your google drawing, and the bright color scheme to your title font.
But I don’t really think that a colorful and bright color scheme suits the weather of floods. Maybe suggest changing the colors?
Try separating the two facts near the top center. It is a bit confusing in my opinion, and it may be hard for some viewer to read.
Has somebody re-checked it, Luke?
Annyeong (bye), I hope you found my suggestions useful.
You could also comment on my blog:
http://awsemeralda.blogspot.com/2018/10/improving-blog-posts.html#comment-form
Here is the link to my original comment:
http://awslukeb.blogspot.com/2018/08/oh-no-flood.html#comment-form
Kia ora Emerald, I can see you have taken time to work on your blog comment. I like the way you have used a greeting and sign off from another language. Remember to get someone to check your comment before you publish to be sure it makes sense. I suggest you change the all capitals to lower case as this is like shouting when you are writing online.
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